[Reborn's Application]

Name:  Phong.

Postion(s): GameMaster/GFX/Forum Mod.

Age: 16.

IGN ( Ingame Name): Reborn.

Location: Toronto Canada. -5:00 GMT.

Expirience:
My GameMaster expirences are as follows:
- KyrosMs (v55)
- HeroicStories (v62)
- StolenMs (v62)
- EncyStory (v62)
- LucardianMs (v75)
- StubbsMs (v75)
- There are a couple more, but I can't remember some. If you would like proofs of these feel free to post below and I can provide you with them (:

My Forum Mod/Admin expirences are as follows:

I have created a number of forums for a number of the servers listed above as my GameMaster expirence.

Again, if you would like to see any of those creations, post below and I will post it as soon as possible.
Some that I remember off by hand are:
http://stubbsms.omgforum.net/login.forum?connexion
http://lucardianms.forumotion.net/login.forum?connexion
http://stolenms.omgforum.net/


My expirence of being a GFX expirence:

I have done numberpus of banners, signatures or just plan random artworks for many servers that were listed above in my GameMaster expirence

Along with those servers, I have did art works for the following servers:
- MapleZtory
- LiteExpMs 
- ShockedMs

Some Examples of my work:
  

Spoiler:

My first piece of maplestory CODING ![Not sure it works or not...]
It's pretty simple, I'm just learning how so don't look to me as a coder (:
It's suppose to change the rates once the player reaches different levels.

Spoiler:

Years Played:
I have been playing the game of MapleStory for approximately 3 years now. I am pretty sure that I have all the features locked and loaded in and out of my head by now. Although I have been only been playing this server for two days, I think I have most of the features down to make sure that all the players who have questions may be answered.

Why Should We Choose You:

Well, I personally do not think that everyone has a good reason of "why should you pick you to be the next GM?".

To me, being a GM is a role given by the owner as an opportunity to help his/her players and help bring more people to his/her to the community more lively. I can say that I know what is correct and what is wrong. I do not mistaken people for hacking and banning them for no particular reasons.
I also do not abuse my powers as an GM even if I hate that particular person to the core. I am able to try fix any errors that the owner is facing. I can also host events(depends if owner agrees with it or not.) I treat newcomers friendly and I am willing to spend time listening to the players problems, chat with them when they are bored, solving and advising, etc.
I do not discriminate my players. Example: calling them names, talking behind their backs. I am very mature in my own stands, there are always ways to solve problems. Not by running away or jumping into conclusions and pin-pointing at others to make them a scapegoat. I am able to differentiate what is correct from wrong, and able to change them.

I am not just a kid who just wants to become a GM to have awesome skills for their own gain.
I find it very degrading to the players, fellow GM and most of all to the Owner when a chosen GM abuses his/her's opportunity by only playing for their gain, and not helping the server.

I am a responsible person and GM's must be responsible, for it only takes one small mistake to change the whole experience for players.


More Info. About Yourself:

I believe that I possess the qualities that create or help create a successful server.

I am very loyal. Loyalty is key on my point of view, I will not quit a server until it has shut down completely. People also leave servers due to the fact that there GM applications getting massive negative responses, I won't, I will try to fix those mistakes and hopefully take something out of it. So please do not refrain from the comments you think would hurt me, it might just help me (:

I am not sure what else to write in this section, I never actually encountered this before hope yo forgive me.
If any further information is required please do not be afraid to leave a comment below or contact me on my msn which is [ASK ME LATER]

Thank you for taking your time to read this application.

Spoiler:

Hm i havnt seen you in game yet but good luck i guess~

Thank you (: I was online in the afternoon yessterday, but decided to take a break today.
Good luck to you as well on your coder application
Hope to see you the in-game soon (:

Ty And yep we'll play tommrow lol ^_^

Haha let's hope so (: it's a nice day tommorrow so who knows what might happen.

You have an interesting application if I say so myself. However, I still think you should wait a bit before applying to lead the server. What I mean by this is that, you've barely joined am I right? You should experience game play as a player. This way, you can meet other players, join events and of course get yourself known by others at first. This is what I recommend for you because I haven't see you myself. I've been online almost everyday whether it'd be for a short time or a long time. Now, going back to your application I'll use my own grading sheet just like Sean, but I won't be the "mean grader." (:
Grammar - o Very few grammar mistakes, remember a period is used after a statement such as a sentence, do not use it right after stating your name!
Spelling - Yes, people utilize "u" in their application and other such text language. There are few errors within the application however not that serious. (i.e: expirence --> experience)
Visually - Of course, the application looks visually appealing, color is included however it is not overused making it superb.

-- My last notes for you would just be to come online often. Maybe it'd be the timezone between us I believe it'd be a three hour difference. Seeing how I'm online a lot I haven't seen you online or participate in any of my events. As for the application itself, what do you mean you can fix any problem the owner is facing? On the section of, "Why should we choose you" those answers are common! Remember we want to see what makes you stand out from everyone else. Your experiences as a GM are astounding and the way you have your screenshots ready is also. I wish you great luck!

-- You're applying for a GFX or as a Game Moderator? You can't apply for both, or you can just clarify which one you are aiming for.
-- As for more about yourself don't you think this is more opinion based? What are your hobbies, favorite things to do, how is school going?

Thanks for the critism (: People sometimes say it's too harsh, but I find it very helpful (; And for that I thank you.

To answer you further on which position I was aiming to apply for, it would mostly for the Graphic Artist. However, I included all the other positions to see if there are any chances if my getting the abilities if helping the server in those situations as well as the Graphics I can provide.


'Helping the owner with problems he may face' - By this I mean that I can help Sam with problems that may occur. I have little knowledge of coding, but I think I hve enough to help with coding errors, for problems that I may not be any service about, I have friends that are able to help.

Information on myself: I did not include hobbies, and such information because I felt that it was irrelavent to my application for a MapleStory private Server. I have no problem sharing, but I think it's better for us to have the conversation somewhere else.

If you have read closly to Years Plated I have stayed my playing time on the server. I know it is rather short, but I have accomplished, in my opinion, enough to be able to help players with their problems.
Being online, I decided to take a break yesterday, and so that was one of the reasons why we didn't met, another reason can be our timezones not being the same? Maybe?
EDIT: Yes, 3hours, I often play during the hours of the morning and the afternoon.

Well I really hope to see you the game soon.

Sorry if I was unable to answer all of the questions or concerns you may have, I am once again writing this on my iTouch. (:

I r Samer's right hand man =D lol. Actually, I'm just another administrator >.>. I'm not going to use my epicly hard grading method cause Kristie called me mean *pouts*. LOL.


~Sean

Lol Sean use it if you want to (:
I don't mind, as I stated before, if it's helpful and not just trying tk be mean, then do it.
People write applications to be seen by everyone, or else they would just PM Sam.

Use your temple as you wish, I am waiting for what people say (:

Get in game for once....

Sorry man I'm not at home at the moment, visiting family and friends before everyone leaves for vacation.
I'll get on sometime tonight for sure though );

O ohk

Sean wrote:I r Samer's right hand man =D lol. Actually, I'm just another administrator >.>. I'm not going to use my epicly hard grading method cause Kristie called me mean *pouts*. LOL.


~Sean

On a another application you called yourself the, "The meanest and hardest grader."

@Reborn,
- One hobby can be playing on the computer, that connects does it not? I didn't mean how long you had played Maplestory, but how long have you played this server based on Maplestory. As for the time difference, I am on the afternoon usually starting from 2PM or 3PM, which would be 5PM or 6PM for you.

I think reborn still hasnt touched the server -__-

Ugh... I've actually seen him on... but that was what? 4 days ago? and Kristie true but that doesn't mean you gotta go against me >.>.


-Sean

Ps: I'll probly end up grading this app with my epicly hard grading-ness.

@ Kristie.
Yes that may be used as an example of a hobby, however, I thought it would be a given.
And again, if you read closely I only claimed myself to have played for two days.

I know I haven't been play much lately, and this is because of the nice weather we currently have. And I feel bad just leaving an application even though I haven't been able to get on, I would understand if I got declined right here and would not think poorly about this server, it's a great server and everyone I've met in the server have been great.

There are other oppertunies for me to have a spot on the staff and if this is not my time, I would try again (;

@Sean
Epically hard? Lol were you there when there was a loot meso party in FM 21? I cant sem to remember.


Again, I'm sorry for not being active, I will try and be active.

Nice to kno

Hi Phong, it was nice to see you online for the first time on the server. (:
I was thinking how I graded you and I thought I was right just kidding dead wrong.
Compared to others your application is conspicuous in both terms of answers and visual quality. I admire that you are so polite to myself, and that shows great character. So, let me fix this up.
[Out of 100]
o Answers: Your own answers to your own questions were phenomenal. They were straight up to the point and were clarified by yourself. You seem to state that you have proof & that is impressive itself. +40
o Visual - The application itself looks visually appealing, color is included, structure seems sophisticated. + 15
o Last Comments - You have wonderful qualities to become a GM, I admire your politeness, your dedication, that you have experience as a GM in many servers. I'm sure your past superiors hired you because of those traits. Personally, I see much more possibilities such as you show the role model attitude. It'd be a privilege to serve alongside you if you are to be accepted. Goodluck! (: + 40

[Final Grade]:
A (95.00%)

Hi Kristy (:
Sorry about leaving in such a rush earlier, I had to eat diner (;
Thank you for praising or at least rethink your mark on my application.

I completely agreed with what you said in your post, and the final mark. It was much higher then the previous mark so that was great (:

Let's just hope Sam (or whomever is picking the GameMasters) feel the same way as well. I look forward to working along you and as well as Sean if the oppertunies arises.

B U M P ? Is it allowed?

I added my first ever MapleStory code o.o

[Reborn] wrote:I added my first ever code o.o

This is your first time using BBCode?
Where have YOU been? You should know how to use it without using them little buttons up there.

Lol I meant Java for MapleStory uses

[Reborn] wrote:Lol I meant Java for MapleStory uses

Lol, k.
That's all good then.

Thanks for the approval? (: